This seven minute PowerPoint presentation provides the outline of the Blogging for business course that I am running on the Gold Coast (Lightbulb Adult Education) and at Mt Gravatt (AceClasses). You can find more details on their websites. Course participants have access to additional course materials that are being posted to the Working with Words website (www.workingwithwords.com.au)
Tuesday, August 31, 2010
Monday, August 30, 2010
Working with Words | September 2010
Strategies for social networking |
The development of Web 2.0 which allows users to build their own web content, combined with the convergence of web and mobile phone technologies has produced an explosion in the number of people who are involved in the social networking phenomenon. No longer do we think of e-mail as being the fastest way to communicate; these days we tweet, or use microblogs to communicate with the world in real time. Facebook alone has more than 400 million users around the world and there are many other SNS from which you can choose. Do you need to become involved in social networking? Well, only you can decide that but like many things, until you get involved you will not know what you are missing. Can you have too much social networking? Yes, it has become obsessive with some people – especially young people. Social networking can become addictive – but often with people who may be insecure in other aspects of their life and who feel more comfortable in virtual relationships than in getting "up-close-and-personal". The psychology of social networking is still in its infancy and no doubt we will hear more of this in the future but clearly no web-based communication protocol, no matter how convenient and instantaneous, can take the place of the most ancient communication tool still available to us – the face-to-face meeting. | For more than twenty years, since leaving the Department of Foreign Affairs, Mike lived and worked in Asia running his own research consultancy, first in Taiwan and then in the Philippines. He has now returned to enjoy Australia with his family while continuing with his writing and editing. Mike now works as a full-time freelance writer and editor as well as mentor, encouraging young people especially to develop their writing and communication skills. Mike is an experienced economic and political analyst and specialises in the development editing of complex reports. He is also now into training and has developed his own course in effective writing - combining creativity with productivity. It is offered both in face to face classes as well as by remote learning. The manual is freely available to readers of this newsletter. Check it out at ww.workingwithwords.com.au Subscribe to this monthly newsletter direct from the website or by emailing Mike at: thecreativegenie@gmail.com However if you do not wish to receive it, just send us an email reply with the word "remove" in the title and we will do the rest. | |
With those caveats in mind, consider carefully your own portfolio of social networking sites based on your interest set. How you choose will depend on what your objective is. If you are just looking to stay in touch with friends and family then A Facebook account may be all you need. On the other hand if you are in business and are looking to market yourself online then you may want to think about a broader social networking strategy. The elements of such a strategy are quite simple:
Whether you are using SNS for purely social or for business purposes, the same push-pull factors will operate. We will talk more about web strategies next month. Mike Clancy Gold Coast 31 August 2010 | ||
Converting PowerPoint to Video | ||
With social networking and especially blogging, becoming so popular these days, many people want to add PowerPoint presentations to their websites. If you are using a collaborative space to work on a presentation with colleagues, then uploading a PowerPoint presentation is a simple matter; however, if you want to add a presentation to Facebook or to your blog, then first you need to convert your presentation to a video format. There is no means of converting a presentation to video format within Office although Windows does give you a manual workaround of sorts. One way is to use the Windows snipping tool to capture each screen of your presentation and save it as a separate image file. Then you can use Windows Movie Maker to reassemble your slides, add transitions and, if you wish, a voice narration as well. This is one way of doing it but it is not ideal. Alternatively you can purchase program suites that will automate the task for you. Converting a presentation to video can be achieved automatically in one of two ways: either you purchase a program that is solely concerned with PowerPoint to video conversion, you specify the file, the transition rate and other variables and allow the software to compile the video into a format of your choice. AVI, MPEG and WMF are commonly used formats by these programs. Alternatively, if you want a little more sophistication, you can use screen capture software to accomplish the same task but with far more options at your disposal. Some of these programs will give you the option of publishing directly to YouTube or a blog of your choice – but make sure the blogging site you are using supports video format (not all do). One word of caution, try before you buy. Some suites work better than others depending not only on the version of Windows or Office you are using but also on the speed and memory of your computer. Working with video files is highly CPU and memory intensive so approach with caution. We cover this topic in more detail in our course on blogging for business and you will find additional resources online at www.workingwithwords.com.au See an example at http://mike-clancy.blogspot.com/2010/08/test-post.html | ||
The importance of punctuation | ||
The appendixes to Effective Writing provides a succinct list of common writing errors. It is not a complete list but rather a compilation of some of those I come across most frequently as an editor. Last month we looked at capitals, colons and semicolons. This month we continue our journey. Dashes and hyphensThere are commonly three types of hyphens and dashes used in punctuation. These are the straight hyphen () plus the extended hyphens: the Em dash (—) and the En dash (–). The hyphen is used in spelling to link compound words, form prefixes and compound adjectives. It is also used to define syntax within sentences by forming compounds needed to keep words together as in the "the soon-to-be prime minister..." Compound family names are also separated with a hyphen as in Barbara Smith-Jones and in printing it is used to split words that do not fit at the end of the line although this should be avoided if at all possible and there are rules as to how to split words when there is no other option. An Em dash is used in much the same way as a colon or parenthetic expressions (in place of brackets). It is often associated with the less formal writing styles and in formal writing a colon or bracket would be used as appropriate. The En dash is used to denote sequence or range as in 2008–2009; "module 2 can be found on pages 36–55" or "module 2 can be found from page 36 to page 55." A spaced En dash " – " can also be used in place of an Em dash which generally does not take spaces. The free and fair elections – if you can call them such – will be held in May of this year. The free and fair elections—if you can call them such—will be held in May of this year. Word 2007 shows a distinct preference for the former and will automatically replace a spaced hyphen with a spaced En dash as you type. Sadly, if you prefer Em dashes (as I do) then you have to place them manually. You can also do this via a global Find and Replace. Some companies and organisations use a Spaced Em dash rather than an unspaced one, so check the preferred style of the organisation for which you are writing. Inverted commasQuotation marks are inverted commas but not all inverted commas are quotation marks. They are a form of punctuation that separates out a group of words from the surrounding text and can be single (' _ ') or double (" _ "). Inverted commas can be used (i) to identify direct speech, (ii) to identify the titles of literary works (but see comment on italics below), (iii) to draw attention to a particular word or a word used in an unusual context or (iv) to indicate that the writer does not necessarily agree with the proposition being put forward. Whether to use single or double quotation marks is a common problem for authors and again there is no one rule for all occasions. In Britain, single commas are more prevalent than double while in the United States the reverse is true. In Australia, the Australian Government style is to use single quotation marks. There are some easy rules to apply and which are widely practised by writers. These are a few suggestions:
As in other areas, in the absence of firm rules being set down for you, what matters most is consistency in your use. .. More next month | ||
Recent Blogs from Mike | ||
Before returning to Australia, Mike spent more than 20 years living and working in Asia and is well-known for his insightful analysis. His most recent monthly commentaries on developments in Taiwan and the Philippines — both countries in which he has lived and worked can be found on his writing blog: http://mike-clancy.blogspot.com/
You can read this newsletter and other writing tips on Mike's Creative Genie blog at online at http://thecreativegenie.blogspot.com/ | ||
Working with Words – Mike's courses | ||
Mike makes his living as a writer and editor. He has developed a number of short courses to share his knowledge and to help others who either want to write for profit or need to be able to use the tools of writing in their business and personal life. Course currently on offer include: Social Networking (basic) Saturday 18th September, 9am–12 noon, Ashmore Wednesday 13th October, , 6pm–9pm, Mount Gravatt Blogging for Business (Basic) Thursday 2nd September, 6pm–9pm, Gold Coast College of Technical and Further Education, Ashmore Wednesday 20th October, 6pm–9pm, ACE Adult Education, Griffith University, Mount Gravatt Campus Effective Writing (intermediate) Saturday 16th October and Saturday 23rd October, Mt. Gravatt For details and copies of the course outline see Mike's blog for writers: thecreativegenie.blogspot.com *** Mike is always available to assist writers and researchers with any queries they may have. Prices are reasonable, professionalism is assured. Other services include:
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The ties that bind
Taipei, China August 28 2010: The Economic Framework Cooperation Agreement (EFCA) with China has now passed into law. Taiwan's unicameral legislature ratified the accord on 17 August after 10 hours of debate. Not unexpectedly, the KMT dominated house, voted down all amendments proposed by the opposition DPP party. Government legislators naturally praised the accord saying "its implementation will ensure the country's prosperity for 50 or 60 years". Those in the Opposition naturally took the reverse view claiming that the ECFA has been "cooked up by the KMT and the Chinese Communist Party" to bring Taiwan under the control of China economically and hastening unification.
It is still too early to tell how the ECFA will alter the course of Taiwan's future development but given the continued expansion of China's hegemony over East Asia, analysts are probably right to sound the warnings – they are there for all too see.
Over the past decade and even under the DPP leadership, Taiwan's economy has become increasingly dependent on the Chinese mainland in what has been termed a triangular pattern of trade whereby orders are booked in Taiwan but manufactured and shipped from China to other markets. One Taiwanese newspaper editorial has pointed out that the percentage of Taiwan's trade carried out in this manner has grown from 13 percent in year 2000 to 50 percent this year. It is this triangular trade arrangement that has led to a hollowing out of Taiwan's manufacturing base (with consequent declines in employment levels) despite the continued growth of exports and GDP.
The key question is whether the signing of the ECFA will reverse this pattern by allowing Taiwan to sign trade agreements with other countries and perhaps develop new industries (especially in services) or will it act as a vacuum cleaner sucking up what remains of Taiwan's industrial base and transplanting it to China. The signs so far do not give much cause for optimism.
But first the good news; the government has once more upgraded Taiwan's domestic growth prospects for this year based on improving export orders, better than expected private investment as well as robust consumer spending. The 6.14 percent domestic growth forecast for 2010 announced back in May, has now been revised to 8.24 percent.
GDP rose 12.53 percent year-on-year in the second quarter, the third consecutive quarter of growth since Taiwan came out of the 2009 recession. For the two remaining quarters of the year, further quarterly expansion rates of 6.9 percent and 1.37 percent are forecast. Looking ahead, the outlook for 2011 is for a growth rate of 4.64 percent.
The main reason for the slowdown of growth in the latter part of the year has been attributed to the base effect rather than any significant real slowdown. This could be an oversimplification as the most recent economic data from the major economies suggest that the pace of recovery could be slowing with the debt crisis in Europe not yet resolved and unemployment in the United States remaining stubbornly high.
The value of export orders in July, at US$33.8 billion, climbed to their fourth highest level ever and their second highest level since the global financial meltdown. Cumulative orders from January to July totalled $227.9 billion, a year-on-year rise of 35.2 percent (but remember the low base effect). Taiwan is hoping that for the year as a whole, orders will surpass $400 billion.
All of this looks very encouraging, but as the Taipei Times pointed out recently in an editorial, few benefits from this continued economic expansion are trickling down to the person in the street. The wealth disparity in Taiwan is at a record high: "In 2008, those in the top 5 percent of the income pyramid enjoyed, on average, an annual income of NT$4.5 million (US$140,530). The bottom 5 percent only earned an average of NT$68,000. In 1998, the highest incomes were only 32 times more than the lowest." It appears that the winners in the economy are the exporters and their shareholders who are able to invest their growing wealth in property, pushing home prices ever higher. The same editorial pointed out that the cost of a home in Taipei City now represents more than 11 years of salary for the average wage earner.
It is hard to see how the ECFA can improve matters for the man in the street. Other commentators have drawn attention to the manner in which China is now enticing Taiwan's high-tech farmers to China under the guise of cross-straits agricultural cooperation. As a result, high-value domestic Taiwan species: animal, fish and plant are now being bred in China on a large-scale sufficient to become a threat to Taiwan's rural industries. Low cost entry of these products into China from Taiwan is only possible if there is a market for them. If China is replacing Taiwanese exports with domestic local production, then rather than expanding the market for Taiwan produce, it will simply disappear entirely. And once China produces these species in sufficient quantities to export, Taiwan is in further difficulty.
Despite the continued reassurance from President Ma Ying-jeou that the signing of cross-straits economic pacts have no political significance; such claims are sounding increasingly hollow. China's agenda for Taiwan is clear for those who want to read the signs and is worrisome not only for Taiwan but for much of East Asia.
Back in the 1990s China passed domestic legislation claiming the entire South China Sea as its territorial waters; this was widely considered to be an ambit claim since many other countries bordering the Sea, including Vietnam, Malaysia, Indonesia and the Philippines were making claims of their own. Recently China upped the ante by proclaiming to visiting US officials in March that the South China Sea was part of its "core national interests" and crucial to its territorial integrity.
Similar to its claim to Taiwan, this puts the matter beyond negotiation as far as China is concerned.
One third of the world's maritime commerce passes through the South China Sea and the implications of this declaration are only too clear. This is a clear laying down of the gauntlet to the United States and in particular the US Navy.
The US attitude towards China's strategic expansion has appeared ambivalent and as a consequence, President Barack Obama's overtures towards China have given Beijing the impression of US weakness. This has tempted China's leaders to press their advantage believing that the US is unwilling to challenge China directly. While US Secretary of State Hillary Rodham Clinton was quick to reassure ASEAN nations that the US considers the maintenance of security and stability in the South China Sea as matters of US national interest, China's foreign minister Yang Jiechi, was equally quick to issue a condemnation of Clinton's comments.
And while ASEAN is seeking multinational negotiations to resolve issues involving common interest maritime areas, Beijing is equally adamant in insisting that the ASEAN countries negotiate bilaterally.
A multilateral forum would, of course, involve the United States, Japan and possibly Korea and this is the last thing that China would want to happen. Nevertheless, where there is action there is reaction. The interesting aspect in all of this is that such a multilateral form – whether or not Taiwan was given a seat at the table (and the likelihood is that it would not be invited) – would serve to give Taiwan a little more freedom to manoeuvre.
But not only has Taiwan's President Ma Ying-jeou followed a policy of appeasement towards Beijing, he is on the record as vowing that no matter what, he will never ask the US to defend Taiwan. No wonder that most of Taiwan's population are bewildered.
With the US economy decidedly shaky, the question for the State Department to ponder is how to deal itself back into the game.
Social Networking Course Outline
Outline of module 2 below. Next course will be held at Ashmore, TAFE on Saturday 18th September.
Wednesday, August 25, 2010
A new paradigm for the Philippines
Manila, 24 August 2010: As this is being written, the Philippines once again has been thrust into the glare of international media attention and for all the wrong reasons. A former officer of the Philippine National Police, sacked over corruption charges, hijacked a bus full of Hong Kong tourists and held members of the 200-strong rescue team at bay for more than 11 hours on August 23. Eight tourists were killed together with the hostage taker during the bloody shootout as police eventually stormed the bus.
The entire event was played out on national TV and relayed around the world for all to see. Up to the minute reporting took on a whole new meaning as reporters covered live, all police activities allowing the hostage taker to monitor what was happening outside the bus and anticipate police moves.
To make matters worse, a group of college girls visited the scene in their school uniform and treated the entire affair as a party even posting their group photos to their Facebook accounts. Tasteless activity in the extreme – whatever were they thinking?
Former Senior Inspector Rolando Mendoza, who – according to reports – was dismissed in 2008, had seized the bus in an attempt to negotiate reinstatement into the police force. Live coverage of his brother being taken in for questioning by police apparently threw the hostage-taker into a frenzy. According to reports from hostages posted to their Facebook accounts, to that point Mendoza had been civil and considerate towards them. It was seeing the manner in which police manhandled his brother which sent him into a rage and changed the entire mood.
President Aquino declared August 25 as a day of mourning as anger mounts in Hong Kong over the manner in which the incident was handled. Four senior members of the Philippine SWAT team have been relieved of their posts over the botched rescue. Hong Kong authorities have issued a travel advisory warning against travel to the Philippines and China itself is expected to follow suit. Overseas Filipino domestic workers in Hong Kong are being summarily dismissed from their jobs as retaliation according to reports.
In the overall scheme of things, while the deaths of eight people will be quickly forgotten by the world at large it has once again signalled the violent nature of Filipino society. It may be recalled that the last time the Philippines made world news was in November 2009 when more than 50 people were gunned down in Maguindanao during a turf war between rival political clans.
Despite the contraction in global tourism worldwide in the aftermath of the Global Financial Crisis, inbound tourism to the Philippines held up well in 2009, rising by 1.5 percent to 3.14 million. Tourism accounts for 6.2 percent of the country's GDP and China has been emerging as an important and rapidly growing market with arrivals from China, Hong Kong and Taiwan all posting significant recent growth thanks especially to the introduction of direct charter flights to regional tourism centres in the Philippines. Undoubtedly, as a result of this incident, there may be a dip in numbers from East Asia for some time to come denting prospects of further growth in the months ahead.
In terms of foreign direct investment, immediate fallout within the East Asian region is expected to be minimal. China (including Hong Kong) accounted for a little over five percent of FDI in 2009 – up from 1.9 per cent in 2008. Much of China's investment is strategic and goes into agriculture and resources and this is expected to continue. Rather, this episode has once again demonstrated the volatility of the local environment for foreign investors generally.
It is the last thing that newly installed President Benigno Aquino II (already dubbed P-Noy – a clever play on the term "Pinoy" which loosely translates as "quintessentially Filipino") needed. President Aquino has been in the job less than two months but already the mood of the country has shifted, and for the better. While his detractors have been quick to criticise his lack of a roadmap for getting the country out of poverty as he has promised to do, he has been given full marks by most people for changing the paradigm of government. His proclaimed mission statement is to wipe out corruption and to make the government more responsive to the basic problems of the Filipino people – mass poverty, increasing malnutrition, unemployment and underemployment, substandard education and poor social services. And that is just to begin.
Both his inaugural speech delivered on 30 June and his State of the Nation (SONA) address to the Philippine Congress four weeks later, underscored this basic theme. His message was not about programs of governance – that will come later, but rather about quality of leadership. Despite his detractors, his message resonated with the ordinary people; and as one newspaper columnist put it, he is regarded as the most credible and most sincere politician to emerge in a long time. It is leadership by example: a leadership which does not exploit power, a leadership that immediately confronts corruption by refusing pomp and perks and disables a source of abuse and discrimination.
While it may be too much to expect corruption to be wiped out during the term of his presidency, with the right leadership from the top, he stands a very good chance of making a significant dent in the problem and rolling back the tide that engulfed the nation during the Arroyo years.
His task is a formidable one. The Central Bank has pointed out that even if the rate of growth can be accelerated, the Philippines has fallen so far behind its neighbours that it will take decades to catch up. Even if the country could achieve a GDP growth rate of 10 percent over the term of his presidency, by 2015, in per capita GDP terms, the country would only be where Indonesia was in 2009. To get to where Thailand is today would take until 2028 and current Malaysian levels of prosperity would only be achieved by 2038.
The refreshing aspect of this announcement was in its honesty – a far cry from the ludicrous claim of Arroyo and her supporters that the Philippines would achieve developed country status by the end of the current decade.
Change will not come easy and already it is evident that there are many, especially those who prospered during the Arroyo years who want to see business as usual. Ten days into his presidency there were five extrajudicial killings including two teachers, a peasant leader a local official and a journalist. Nobody has yet been brought to account.
While resistance to reform is expected, especially from those in Congress used to presidential largesse, Mr. Aquino has something going for him that former President Arroyo never had – the support of the people. That can be a formidable weapon.
Saturday, July 31, 2010
Working with Words | August 2010
A newsletter for writers
There is always something to write about
Welcome to the second of my monthly newsletters. I have always found it good practice, no matter what else comes along, to find some time each week to write. I remember some advice given me early in my career that there is always something going on worth writing about and it is advice I have sought to follow.
My own writing genre inclines towards topical events verging on the "documentary" style rather than fiction which still remains a challenge for me.
July proved to be an extremely busy month finalizing the editing of two major projects for an international organization plus local work. Consequently I have had little time to write for myself other than my monthly commentaries on Taiwan and the Philippines – both countries in which I have lived and worked – and which I have been writing about for more than 10 years (since 1977 in the case of Taiwan, and 2001 in the case of the Philippines).
This coming month I hope to have time to refine the guide book on effective writing that I published earlier in the year and which, with experience of use, needs a little tweaking in places to make it easier to follow. Hopefully I can complete that task during August.
Michael (Mike) Clancy
The overlooked office suite
When was the last time you opened Microsoft Works? Works is a simple office or home application suite that comes with your (Windows) operating system.
A few years back Works was sold as a stripped-down version of Office. Now Microsoft gives it away for free. Many people never get around to opening it and dive straight into MS-Office.
That is a pity since Works provides an ideal means of cutting your teeth on the common applications. The interface is bright and colourful and in a format that is guaranteed to appeal to young and old who are sometimes intimidated by the no-nonsense approach of Office.
What is more, unlike Office, Works comes with its own menu from which you can select the application you want to use or choose a template for a particular task. It is ideal for home or school use. For young people learning computer basics, it is an effective teaching/learning tool.
Works provides you with a word processor, a spreadsheet and a database application, all of which bear uncanny resemblances to earlier versions of Office software.
Perhaps this is not surprising. What this means though is that perhaps, you have all your initial needs on your computer already and you may want to check out what you get for free (or with the initial purchase) before spending hundreds of dollars on the latest software, much of which you may never use.
The word processor provides templates for brochures, birthday cards, event flyers —even grocery lists. The spreadsheet will allow you to construct not only a financial worksheet but also a fitness tracking schedule, household records and a vehicle log book among other things.
You can read more on this topic in Effective Writing or online at www.workingwithwords.com.au
The importance of punctuation
The appendixes to Effective Writing provides a succinct list of common writing errors. It is not a complete list but rather a compilation of some of those I come across most frequently as an editor. A handy reference to have is the Oxford A-Z of Grammar and Punctuation. This is available from most bookstores.
Use of capitals
When it comes to headings, you should understand the difference between Sentence style capitalisation and Headline Style Capitalisation. In sentence-style capitalization only the first word in a title, the first word in a subtitle, and any proper names are capitalized. Headline style is a little more complex. In this style, many of the heading words are capitalised – but not all. There are no hard and fast conventions, rather it is more a matter of appearance, emphasis and grammar (and of course consistency). Some words are always capitalised (such as nouns, pronouns, verbs and adjectives); some are always lower case (unless used as the first or last word in a title). These include the definite and indefinite articles and prepositions (unless they are stressed); other times a decision is called for. If this is likely to cause a problem for you, opt for sentence style headings.
One other aspect of using capitals is worth mentioning, especially in the context of e-mail. Some people use capitalisation as a means of emphasis. However, capitalisation has also come to be associated with anger or displeasure. "PLEASE READ THE ATTACHMENT TO THIS E-MAIL" may to you mean no more than "hey, don't forget to read the attachment since it's important". However, your reader could easily read into it "You idiot, why have you not opened the attachment". Be careful!
Colons and semicolons
We will not explain the use of full-stops (periods) and commas here. Most people appear to understand the basics but many people get into trouble when it comes to using colons and semicolons.
Colons have three basic uses. They can introduce lists (both inline lists as well as ordered and unordered lists); they are often used to introduce a quotation and they are also used in a similar manner to commas and semi-colons to differentiate between the clauses of a sentence. A colon is considered the strongest sentence break and is commonly used as a break between two main clauses.
Colons are also used to differentiate parts of a heading and caption (such as "Table 3: Recent growth rates"). Sometimes the pipe (|) is called upon to fulfil this role.
Where two sentences are part of a common idea, the second building on the first, the semicolon can be used to turn the two separate sentences into a single sentence.
Care needs to be taken that sentences do not become too long or too convoluted but often the single sentence makes for more fluid writing that by coming to a full stop. In sentences containing multiple clauses they can also be used together with commas to make the flow of ideas easier to understand.
One quick rule to determine where to use what, is to read the passage aloud and determine where the natural breaks are to be found. A comma represents one beat; a semicolon, two beats; a colon, three beats; and a full stop, four beats.
Just look at the preceding sentence to see how commas and semicolons work together.
..More next month
Recent blogs from Mike
Before returning to Australia, Mike spent more than 20 years living and working in Asia and is well-known for his insightful analysis. His most recent monthly commentaries on developments in Taiwan and the Philippines — both countries in which he has lived and worked can be found on his writing blog: http://mike-clancy.blogspot.com/
- The deal is done (Taiwan) click here to read
- The different faces of corruption (Philippines) click here to read
- You can read this newsletter online at http://thecreativegenie.blogspot.com/
"If you cannot say what you mean, you will never mean what you say"
The origins of the above quote are obscure but it proved to be one of the most memorable lines from the movie epic, The Last Emperor. In writing for any audience, it is a good maxim to keep in mind.
Communication involves the ability of the author to relate essential facts and ideas to the reading audience in a manner that the reader is able to understand and then, if needed, act upon. Writing style should convey this ability to communicate; indeed it is the hallmark of anyone in the teaching, research or knowledge management professions.
Dr. Michael Clancy is a published author, freelance writer, researcher and editor who has lived and worked in Asia for more than 30 years. He has now returned to Australia and has his home on the Queensland Gold Coast. He travels between Australia, the Middle East and Asia undertaking research and editing assignments for the ILO, various UN bodies and the Asian Development Bank.
As an editor, Mike believes that the best output can be obtained when writers, researchers and editors work closely together in the development and delivery of the final product. Mike firmly believes that an important role for the editor to play is that of "author's advocate" who, while staying true to the author's intent, looks at any piece as would a general reader. His suggestions to author's are often made with this role in mind.
Mike is always available to assist writers and researchers with any queries they may have. Prices are reasonable, professionalism is assured.
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Saturday, June 26, 2010
Working with words
A newsletter for writers
July 2010
Welcome to "working with words"
Having a regular newsletter to keep in touch with friends and colleagues has been a plan for some time but only recently have I had time to focus on producing it.
In recent years I have edited more than 40 reports and books, the vast majority of them for writer's living and working in Asia. One thing that has become evident in this age of "point and click" is that many of us miss the subtleties and the tools available that can make writing so much more productive and enjoyable.
As a result I have written a guide book on effective writing that provides useful advice to authors both on the use of "international English" as well as providing tips for more productive writing by unlocking the power of your word processor. You can download a free copy for your personal use from the working with words website (details elsewhere in this newsletter) or by simply emailing me requesting a copy.
Of course, I do not want to clutter your mailbox unnecessarily and if you would prefer to be removed from my mailing list, please drop me a line and you will be taken off straight away.
Michael (Mike) Clancy
Five questions that lead to effective writing
Communication is both an art and a science. It involves the ability of the author to relate essential facts and ideas to the reading audience in a manner that the audience is able to understand and then, as needed, act upon. Writing style should convey this ability to communicate; indeed it is the hallmark of anyone in the teaching, research or knowledge management professions.
A good practice when starting out on a writing project, no matter how simple, is to ask five basic questions:
What am I writing?
Obviously the effort you put into a doctoral dissertation will be quite different to a one-page inter-office memo; yet the processes are remarkably similar.
Why am I writing?
This defines the opening, the closure and also governs what needs to be included; the answer to this question defines the template.
For whom am I writing
defining the recipient audience will inform the writing style.
Why should anybody read it?
this will inform the end result; what will your readers know (or what insight will they have) that they did not know at the outset and what difference will this make to them (for example: as a result of reading your report will the reader know how to implement a project or who to ask if they wish to find out more?) Or is it more in the nature of a "compliance document" which is required for an "up-line" as a way of signifying project completion? The writing styles and the information content will be quite different in each case.
What reaction do I want from my reader?
Does your piece lead your reader down the path you wish them to take and lead to clear conclusions that your reader can identify and agree with? If you can answer these question before you begin to write, you are well on your way to writing effectively. You can read more on this topic in the Working with Words book or online at www.workingwithwords.com.au
Common writing errors
It is often a good idea to keep your own list of words that cause difficulties (sometimes they can be simple words) because of spelling differences or confusion with similar sounding words of different meaning. This writer, in his role as an editor, has begun to compile a list of common writing errors both as a guide to good writing practice as well as a reminder of common mistakes to keep on the lookout for. This newsletter will provide a means of sharing such tips.
A second point to make is to distinguish clearly between grammar and style. While Australian, British and American English have some grammatical differences in terms of spelling and punctuation, style by contrast depends on the audience. In journalist writing, AP (Associated Press) style is commonly used and provides the style book for many newspapers and newsstand publications but this style would probably not be appropriate if your goal is to write a Ph.D. dissertation. The Chicago Manual of Style is referred to several times throughout my book and is considered to be one of the most authoritative sources in the world —in part due to its sheer comprehensive coverage and constant revision to reflect changing standards. It is often the norm for academic writing.
For Australia, the Style Manual is the standard for Australian government and many other publications and has also been consulted in the preparation of this material.
The appendixes to the Macquarie Dictionary (as well as other reference dictionaries) contain a summary guide to grammar and punctuation as well as other useful material
While Effective Writing does not seek to provide a complete guide to writing and grammar styles, the appendix does provide a list of common mistakes made by writers as noted by this editor.
This is just a quick guide that will be published progressively in this newsletter and one that this author, in his role as editor will add to from time to time. If you wish, you can consider it a first point of reference but it is no substitute for keeping a good dictionary and a style manual by your side while you are writing.
Above all remember that English as a language continues to evolve and the most important thing to keep in mind is consistency. After all, within limits imposed by those for whom you are writing (and I include here your readers) you are captain of your own ship.
If you would like a copy of the book from which these tips are taken then please contact Mike by e-mail at thecreativegenie@gmail.com (176 pages; pdf format is free-of-charge).
Recent blogs from Mike
Before returning to Australia, Mike spent more than 20 years living and working in Asia (Hong Kong, Korea, Taiwan and the Philippines) and is well-known for his insightful analysis. His recent commentaries on developments in Taiwan and the Philippines—both countries in which he has lived and worked can be found on his writing blog: http://mike-clancy.blogspot.com/
The marginalization of Taiwan click here to read
The long road back (Philippines) click here to read
"If you cannot say what you mean, you will never mean what you say"
The origins of the above quote are obscure but it proved to be one of the most memorable lines from the movie epic, The Last Emperor. In writing for any audience, it is a good maxim to keep in mind.
Communication involves the ability of the author to relate essential facts and ideas to the reading audience in a manner that the reader is able to understand and then, if needed, act upon. Writing style should convey this ability to communicate; indeed it is the hallmark of anyone in the teaching, research or knowledge management professions.
Dr. Michael Clancy is a published author, freelance writer, researcher and editor who has lived and worked in Asia for more than 30 years. He has now returned to Australia and has his home on the Queensland Gold Coast. He travels between Australia, the Middle East and Asia undertaking research and editing assignments for the ILO, various UN bodies and the Asian Development Bank.
As an editor, Mike believes that the best output can be obtained when writers, researchers and editors work closely together in the development and delivery of the final product. Mike firmly believes that an important role for the editor to play is that of "author's advocate" who, while staying true to the author's intent, looks at any piece as would a general reader. His suggestions to author's are often made with this role in mind.
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Thursday, April 29, 2010
Bouncing back
Taiwan | May 2010
For the "old China hands" news in recent weeks from Taiwan has provided us with a refreshing blast from the past. After all the doom and gloom or recent months there was an air of familiarity about the recent newspaper headlines such as we have not seen for a long time.
True with the Republic of China due to celebrate its centennial later this year, announcement that the slogan for the occasion would be "100 Years of Excellence" seemed to be more appropriate to a venerated department store than a country that has become an Asian wűnderkinder, but then, perhaps after all that is what Taiwan is all about. Democracy, liberty and personal freedom are all very well but it is the ring of the cash registers and (these days) the swiping of the credit card that give people here the warm fuzzies. And after all, talking about democracy and freedom under Ma Ying-jeou are tantamount to treason and best left off the agenda lest someone across the water gets offended.
So for a change, it is good news month! Firstly there is news that Taiwan's economy appears to be well and truly out of the recessionary tailspin of recent times and is once more gaining altitude. All major economic indicators have rebounded, the economy is in expansionary mode and activity has returned to pre-crisis levels. Importantly, consumer confidence is also increasing despite a doggedly high unemployment rate. Unemployment is coming down but only slowly and is proving to be the laggard in the recovery process. Nevertheless unemployment has fallen to a 14-month low but is predicted to remain above five percent for the rest of the year.
Most economic think tanks have again revised their economic growth targets for this year. The Taiwan Institute of Economic Research (TIER) is now forecasting GDP expansion of 5.11 percent year-on-year for 2010, while the other government think tank, the Chung Hua Institute of Economic Research is punting on 4.99 percent. The IMF set heads turning with its announcement in the latest World Economic Outlook report that it expected Taiwan to achieve a 6.5 percentage point growth. Amongst these heady announcements, the government is being a little more circumspect; the Council for Economic Planning and Development is saying that it expected the economy to grow "by at least five percent."
When Taiwan comes out of recession it does not mess around, it is bouncing back with a vengeance.
Exports are now expected to grow by 26.83 percent over the course of the year to US$258.3 billion, according to the TIER. This exceeds the previous estimate of a 10.51 percent increase to US$225.1 billion, by a wide margin.
This optimistic forecast comes on the strength or a rapid rebound in export sales during the first quarter. In March alone exports rose US$7.8 billion, or by 50.1 percent, year-on-year to $23.4 billion; while imports were up US$9.74 billion, or 80.3 percent to $21.9 billion. These were the highest levels recorded since the onset of the global financial crisis. The trade surplus reached US$1.5 billion in March according to the official figures.
Looking at the first quarter as a whole, exports rose by US$21.28 billion, or 52.5 percent from a year ago, to US$61.8 billion. This was the second-highest figure for that period in Taiwan's history. With export activity strengthening, local manufacturers are taking the opportunity to retool and reinvest in plant and equipment. This in turn is driving imports, which were up US$25.1 billion, or 78.4 percent, year-on-year for the quarter. Now admittedly, with the economy mired in recession this time last year, these numbers are influenced by the low base effect but it does mean that Taiwan's export driven economy is back on track—and in the fast lane.
Exports to China, including Hong Kong, rose to a record US$10.26 billion in March, accounting for 43.9 percent of total exports, followed by ASEAN at 14.4 percent and Europe at 10.5 percent.
Export orders in contrast to shipments are a means of looking ahead at the position in coming months. Again the figures are pleasing. Taiwan's export orders in March grew by 43.66 percent from a year earlier to US$34.39 billion. Reportedly this was the highest total in the Taiwan's history and came on the back of strong demand from Asia-Pacific markets for Taiwan's sophisticated electronic products. For the first quarter of the year, total orders amounted to US$92.2 billion—up by almost 50 percent from the same period last year and 28 percent higher than in the final quarter of 2008.
For the first quarter, total orders amounted to US$92.17 billion, up 49.31 percent from the same period last year and 28.03 percent higher than the previous quarter.
Foreign exchange reserves reached a record high of $355 billion topped only by China, Japan and Russia and higher that Korea, Hong Kong and India.
Now these are the numbers that Taiwanese like to hear.
Despite all the good news coming out of the statistical bureau, the Ministry of Foreign Affairs was quick to sound a cautionary note claiming that Taiwan's export competitiveness had steadily declined over the past nine years in comparison with its major trade competitors, especially the other Asian tigers. Of course, this was meant to signal the need for Taiwan to sign the economic cooperation framework agreement with China (ECFA) which, so the government claims, will ensure Taiwan will not be marginalized in the wake of the creation of the ASEAN Plus One (China) free trade area.
Others disagree claiming that despite the agreement between China and ASEAN, Taiwan's economy is proving exceptionally resilient—as the latest export figures show. The fear is the hub and spoke effect whereby Taiwan's future exports to ASEAN would be funnelled through China rather than allowing Taiwan to continue to deal directly with its ASEAN neighbours.
The problem with any proposed agreement with China is that the "devil is in the detail" and the government has been rather coy about revealing any of the detail. It hopes that the framework agreement will be ready for signature within the next two months but President Ma has repeatedly ducked questions as to whether it will be put to the legislature for ratification or not. The implication is that it will not.
What is in the proposed agreement is still a matter of conjecture. Since negotiations are still underway and the issue has such sensitivity—very few people are neutral about it; most have either strong views in favour or strong views against—this is understandable. Much has been made of the so-called "early harvest" provisions which, so the government claims, will bring early benefits to Taiwan by reducing tariffs on a number of items—but so far we do not know which. President Ma has stated that the agreement will not allow Chinese agricultural items into Taiwan thereby protecting Taiwan's own farmers; nor will it allow Chinese labour into Taiwan. Probably it does not need to do so because already most Taiwanese factories are located on the Chinese mainland anyhow. If there has been any rational debate in the local press it has been over the investment conditions, and more precisely, the laws that limit China's state-owned corporations investing into Taiwanese companies. Already China is circumventing these conditions by investments through Hong Kong companies to gain greater leverage in Taiwan's commercial and financial sector.
So is the ECFA a Trojan horse, a gun to Taiwan's head or a panacea to solve all problems? You can find it described as all of these and much more. One thing is certain however, President Ma intends to push it through at whatever cost. People can do nothing other than watch and hope that it will not be a replica of the closer economic partnership agreement Chine signed with Hong Kong.
Thursday, April 22, 2010
White slavery
Reza comes from the province of Zambales in the Philippines. Her home is a small town just north of the Subic Bay Freeport. She is 29 years old but no longer working. She is seeking to recover from tuberculosis which she contracted during the short period she spend in the United Arab Emirates.
Reza is a beautician by training having graduated from a local college in Olongopo, the nearest major town to her home. Previously, she ran her own beauty shop, employed two other staff and while not exactly making her fortune, she was doing well and supporting her family.
But the grass is always greener elsewhere and Reza was impressed by a local labour recruiting agency that passed through her town one day looking for people who were prepared to spend a year working in the United Arab Emirates. As a trained beautician, her skills would be much in demand they said. There were many Filipinos running successful parlours in the Middle East; why should she not be one of them?
She took the bait and a few weeks later was on her way to Dubai. She had sold her business to raise the funds needed by the agency for her visa and employment processing and this had taken pretty much all she had. "Never mind," she thought, "I can make this back and much more in just a few short months." How wrong, she proved to be. It was only when she was on her way to the Manila International Airport, that she realized that she had been given a one-month visitor visa and not the employment visa she had expected. "Don't worry" she was assured by her escort "this is just to get you there quickly, once you are in the UAE our agency will change the visa for you." This was her first inkling that something might be amiss, but it was too late to do anything now, "better go there and sort it out after arrival," she thought.
Reza stepped off the plane at Dubai airport and was met by another Filipina, a young girl with a round face, slightly plump but friendly enough. The girl took her hand and introduced herself as Diane and who, Reza judged, was of similar age. A good sign, Reza thought, already I have a friend. Diane took the passport and papers from her and told her it was to change her visa. She was then taken to her accommodation, which was a small dingy room in an old decrepit apartment building that she was told she would have to share with five other girls. There were two sets of three-tier bunks in the room but little else. Her unease was starting to return as the reality was proving to be quite different to the picture that had been painted to her before she signed up.
Then came the shocking news from Diane that to change her status from that of a visitor visa to an employment visa, the agency would charge her an additional AED17,000 (around US$4,600). Her shock at this news was instantaneous and devastating. She was told by Diane that instead of her intended employment, she would be put to work in a bar so she could earn a better income and she could easily pay this money back. Once she had paid this amount she would be free to keep her earnings for herself but until this time, any money she made would have to be paid to Diane, who was in effect her mamasan. Only then, did the cold blast of reality hit her with full force and Reza froze with the realization of what she had got herself into.
That night she was picked up with the other girls and taken to one of the hotel bars that abound in Dubai. It is only in the hotels that alcohol is allowed to be served and expatriates as well as wealthy Arabs congregate in these places in droves each evening; some to the extent of having the best tables permanently reserved for their use. One of the girls with her, Jenalyn, realizing her state of agitation sought to take her under her wing. On arriving at the bar, Jenalyn looked around for some familiar faces and found a couple she knew slightly, a British expatriate businessman who was there with his Filipina wife. She introduced Reza to the couple explaining that she was new in town. The couple offered Reza to join them and brought her a drink. Very quickly, they learned the story which did not surprise them, they had heard it all before although the price demanded by Diane for return of Reza's papers surprised them somewhat. They left the bar with Reza shortly after paying her bar fine and explained that she could stay at their place for the evening, promising to make some phone calls the following morning to see if they could assist her in finding legitimate work.
They had not been in their car for more than a few minutes when Reza's phone rang. It was Diane demanding to know how much the couple were paying her. The phone was taken from her by the couple and Diane was told in no uncertain terms that where she was going, what she was doing and what she would be paid was no business of hers.
That night Reza was well looked after. She had a good meal and she was given some money by the couple the following morning and told to say as little as possible to her mamasan but to keep in touch, and they would try and see what they could do using their connections.
Things did not progress quickly and Reza had no choice but to work the bar as a prostitute. Diane was never out of sight and Reza had to turn over all her income. Unbeknown to Diane, Jenalyn continued to slip her sufficient cash to buy a cell phone load so that she could stay in contact with the outside world – small though it was.
This situation continued for three months. Reza's agency obtained two one month extensions for her to her original visa but at the end of the third month she had to leave the UAE for a while and took the least costly option used by expats on limited budgets—a trip to Kish Island off the coast of Iran.
Kish Island is a duty free port and resort area. Politically, it is part of the Hermozgān Province of Iran. An island of only 21,000 residents, it nevertheless attracts five million visitors a year chiefly because no visa is needed to visit the island and travel permits can be issued after arrival. This explains its attraction for those expatriates needing to undertake visa runs.
The island boasts of many fine resorts and coral reefs for those wishing to explore them but Reza's visit was under much more basic conditions. She was advised to go and wait on the island while her new visa was processed. It would then be sent to her by fax enabling her to return to Dubai and her original visa papers would be waiting there at the airport on her return. This process would take only a few days to complete but, of course, required additional cash which Reza had to borrow from her friends and pay to Diane before she left.
Arriving on Kish and with only very little money in her pocket she was forced to stay in the cheapest accommodation possible. Her budget for food and accommodation was only AED50 (US$13.50) per day. Or to put this in purchasing power terms, this represented about the cost of one Big Mac meal. In her circumstances, she had no choice but to opt for the cheapest room she could find and which she shared with nine others. The place was squalid and without running water or proper sanitation but she reasoned she could endure it for two or three nights.
Again she found her plight to be worse than she imagined. She arrived on Kish Island on 14 December 2008 and did not manage to return to Dubai until 30 January. After waiting on the island for a week without hearing from Diane she quickly realized that she had been double-crossed and that Diane had taken her money without any intention of processing a new visa application. She was to be left stranded. She used the last of her cash to phone her British friends and beg assistance anew which they readily gave. Through their efforts she was eventually given a visa and the money needed to return to Dubai and was met by Jenalyn at the airport upon her return.
Jenalyn explains: "I was shocked at her condition and at first did not recognise her. She had lost around 10 kilograms in weight and looked terribly gaunt and agitated. She appeared to have aged 10 years in the space of just six weeks and could barely bring herself to recount her ordeal. It took us several days to tease it all out of her. It was a shocking story."
Even after several days resting at their home, Reza continued to feel listless and her condition showed little sign of improvement. It was only then that the couple realized that Reza was in fact ill and they took her to their company doctor for a medical check-up. There they heard the grim news; Reza had contracted tuberculosis as a result of her stay on Kish.
TB is a notifiable disease and Reza was transferred immediately to the isolation ward of al Rashid hospital in Dubai where treatment is free. The downside is that anyone with TB is deported from the Emirates and she was only allowed to stay in hospital and receive treatment for as long as it took to arrange her exit papers and her return to the Philippines as soon as she was well enough to travel.
Her friends visited her at the hospital every day and took her Filipino food in an effort to cheer her up. They were the only visitors she had during her entire confinement. They notified the Philippine Embassy as well as Diane but she had no other visitors.
But that is not the end of this story. Her friends also made contact with another journalist friend of theirs whose newspaper is now investigating the story. With the cooperation of the UAE authorities, this particular agency is under investigation and charges may yet be laid against certain Emirati and Filipino nationals as well as—possibly—others. It may be too late to help Reza in any meaningful way, but publication of her story, might perhaps provide a cautionary warning to others who may be contemplating the prospects of making easy money.
Sunday, April 18, 2010
The one day of the year
Many countries set aside one day each year to honour their soldiers, especially those who died in battle, and Australia is no exception.
On 25 April each year, Australians – as well as New Zealanders – celebrate ANZAC DAY. Together with Christmas Day and Easter, this day is regarded as one of the most important in the national calendar. Unlike, Christmas and Easter which are occasions observed throughout the Christian world, ANZAC Day is unique to Australia and the South Pacific.
The word ANZAC is derived from the term "Australia and New Zealand Army Corps". It marks the anniversary of the first major military action fought by Australian and New Zealand soldiers during the First World War. When war broke out in 1914, Australia had been united as a Commonwealth for only 13 years; until 1901, it had been a collection of independent states and territories. Originally, ANZAC Day was intended to honour the soldiers who fought at Gallipoli in Turkey. April 25 marks the date of the first landing on the beaches of Turkey in 1915 at the start of what was to become a fierce eight-month long campaign. But now its significance has broadened to commemorate all those who died and served in military operations for their countries.
According to the official history of ANZAC Day posted on the website of the Australian War Memorial:
The Australian and New Zealand forces landed on Gallipoli on 25 April, meeting fierce resistance from the Ottoman Turkish defenders. What had been planned as a bold stroke to knock Turkey out of the war quickly became a stalemate, and the campaign dragged on for eight months. At the end of 1915 the allied forces were evacuated, after both sides had suffered heavy casualties and endured great hardships. Over 8,000 Australian soldiers had been killed. News of the landing on Gallipoli had made a profound impact on Australians at home, and 25 April soon became the day on which Australians remembered the sacrifice of those who had died in the war.
Although the Gallipoli campaign failed in its military objectives, the Australian and New Zealand actions during the campaign left us all a powerful legacy. The creation of what became known as the "ANZAC legend" became an important part of the identity of both nations, shaping the ways they viewed both their past and their future.
The 25th April was officially named as ANZAC Day in 1916 and quickly developed into a national day of commemoration for the 60,000 Australian troops that died in that war. Commemorative services are held at dawn throughout the country to mark the time of the landing and where usually the "Ode of Remembrance" authored by Laurence Binyon is read aloud prior to a period of silent observance:
They shall not grow old, as we that are left grow old.
Age shall not weary them, nor the years condemn.
At the going down of the sun and in the morning
We will remember them.
Usually the words Lest we forget are added at the end of the ode and before the period of silent observance. In many observations a bugler also plays The Last Post.
Binyon (1869–1943) was an English poet and art critic who worked at the British Museum before joining the British Army to fight in WW1. Actually the ode is part of a larger poem written in 1914 and known as For the Fallen. It was written just after the Battle of the Marne to honour the British war dead although nowadays the third and fourth stanzas have become a tribute to all casualties of war regardless of nation. The entire poem is reproduced at the end of this piece.
In Australia and New Zealand, the day is observed in two parts. In the early hours and throughout the morning, the emphasis is on solemnity and reflection, mourning those who have died in war and, these days especially, the futility of war. Shops remain closed and people congregate throughout the country to pay respect not only to those who died but also the veterans and those who continue to wear a military uniform in order to defend us.
In the afternoon the mood changes and from a period of solemn reflection, the focus is on friends, family and the enjoyment of life while we have it.
It is worth remembering that ANZAC Day does not celebrate a military victory since the allied forces were roundly defeated at Gallipoli. Alan Seymor in his 1960 play about Anzac Day "The One Day of the Year" summed up the national psyche in a single line:
They tried and they was beaten. A man's not too bad who'll stand up in the street and remember when he was licked.
In essence, while many other countries celebrate their victories, Australians and New Zealanders are proud to remember the heroism of their soldiers in defeat.
But perhaps, the most moving lines of all are those written not in Australia, New Zealand or even England but rather by the Commander of the Turkish forces, Mustafa Kemal Atatűrk, who later went on to become the first President of Turkey when it became a republic in 1923 and who wrote a tribute to the fallen ANZACs in the following terms:
Those heroes that shed their blood and lost their lives... You are now lying in the soil of a friendly country. Therefore rest in peace. There is no difference between the Johnnies and the Mehmets to us where they lie side by side now here in this country of ours... you, the mothers, who sent their sons from faraway countries wipe away your tears; your sons are now lying in our bosom and are in peace. After having lost their lives on this land. They have become our sons as well.
For The Fallen
With proud thanksgiving, a mother for her children,
England mourns for her dead across the sea.
Flesh of her flesh they were, spirit of her spirit,
Fallen in the cause of the free.
Solemn the drums thrill; Death august and royal
Sings sorrow up into immortal spheres,
There is music in the midst of desolation
And a glory that shines upon our tears.
They went with songs to the battle, they were young,
Straight of limb, true of eye, steady and aglow.
They were staunch to the end against odds uncounted;
They fell with their faces to the foe.
They shall grow not old, as we that are left grow old:
Age shall not weary them, nor the years contemn.
At the going down of the sun and in the morning
We will remember them.
They mingle not with their laughing comrades again;
They sit no more at familiar tables of home;
They have no lot in our labour of the day-time;
They sleep beyond England's foam.
But where our desires are and our hopes profound,
Felt as a well-spring that is hidden from sight,
To the innermost heart of their own land they are known
As the stars are known to the Night;
As the stars that shall be bright when we are dust,
Moving in marches upon the heavenly plain;
As the stars that are starry in the time of our darkness,
To the end, to the end, they remain.
Friday, April 16, 2010
Stories from the gate
Every day, runaway workers can be seen milling around the gate at the entrance to the Labour Office of the Philippine Embassy in Abu Dhabi. Despite the risk, they run away because of ill-treatment. Overwork, no pay as well as physical or mental abuse are their common complaints.
Cielo had worked for four years for a local family and during that time had been denied any communication with her family in the Philippines. Upon arrival, her cellular phone had been confiscated and she was not allowed to leave the house, even on her supposed day off. She explained that in the entire four years of working for her employer she had been able to send money home only once and this amounted to AED 2,500 (USD 680 approx.). Once when she attempted to escape, she was caught by the wife of her employer and as punishment she was held down while a hot iron was pressed against her arm and her stomach. In September 2007, she finally managed to escape and make her way to the Philippine Embassy in Abu Dhabi which is now handling her case. Six months later, matters are still not resolved.
Theresa comes originally from Antique, a province in the Central Philippines and has six children at home that she is seeking to support. She came to the UAE to work for an Arab employer and signed a contract for two years with a Manila-based employment agency. Her specified monthly salary is supposedly AED 750 (USD 204) but for the past eight months she has not been paid at all. In desperation, she ran away. She explained that not only did she receive no money for her work but she was often physically abused by her employer and her employer's 10-year old child who had taken to biting her arm as a means of getting attention. She was unable to complain as the excuse of her employer was simply that had she been attending properly to his needs, he would not have had reason to bite her. The fault was therefore her own. Her arm has now become infected. She was constantly being accused of stealing jewellery, money and other valuables and was allowed no privacy at all. She was unable to close the door of her room and her employer would conduct random checks of her personal possessions. She was not allowed a mobile phone nor any means of communication with the outside world. When her arm became infected because of the constancy of the bites inflicted on her she managed to run away. She is now receiving medical attention but her future is unsure and she is destitute.
Rowena trained as Janitress in Manila in preparation for overseas employment and signed a two-year contract to work as a janitress in the UAE at a monthly salary of AED 1,500. Upon arrival, she was told that her original job was no longer available and she would be employed as a domestic servant at a salary of AED 700 per month or less than half of what she had expected. Because she needed the work she had no choice but to take the new contract but found that her life was a miserable one. She had to work seven days a week, was allowed no rest and no privacy. If she took a rest break from her duties she was accused of laziness. She was constantly being verbally abused and accused of stealing— even to the point of food items that went (supposedly) missing from the refrigerator. In the end, she could take no more and exhausted, she fled to the Labour Office of the Philippine Embassy, seeking their help to return to her family.
Angelita worked for Lebanese family and had already completed 17 months of her two-year contract without a break. Recently, she asked her employer for 15 days vacation in order to visit her family in the Philippines and sort out some personal problems but her request was refused and she was hit by her employer when she sought to intercede with him to allow her request. Fearing that she would be penalized for daring to argue with her employer, she escaped from the house and is now seeking the means to return to Manila.
Fedeliza worked as a housemaid for a family in which there were 13 children to care for plus the parents of her employer. There were only two domestic helpers in the house to care for a large and demanding family. Her companion was a Bangladeshi and both were constantly exhausted from overwork and lack of rest. They could be called upon at any time of the day or night and were expected to respond immediately. Despite having a contract that paid AED 700 a month, her employer had given her only AED 500 a month. She escaped from the household when her male employer started molesting her.
Sandra had been hired as a driver but instead, was forced to work as a domestic helper. She was accused of stealing jewellery, punched and slapped and had been locked in a room for one week. She had not been paid her salary. When she asked if she could leave and go back to the Philippines, her employer had demanded that she pay them USD 2,000 by way of compensation. Scared of her situation and what her employer might do to her, she jumped from a second floor window in order to escape.
Rowena said she came to the Embassy because her employer had been treating her badly. She had been asked not to communicate with her family in the Philippines but, as she explained, she has a young daughter and needs to keep in touch, even if it is only once a week. Out of her salary, she bought for herself a small mobile phone but her employer found the phone. Not only was her phone confiscated, so was all her money so she could not buy another one. She tried several times to get out of the house but the door and gates were kept locked and the security guard employed by the family had been ordered not to allow Rowena out of the house. At one point she had tried to suicide by overdosing on medicine but all that happened was that she became ill. Luckily she found her opportunity to escape at 4 am one morning when the guard was absent from his post. She found the key to the gate and managed to take with her, her most important possessions. She would like to find alternative employment in the Emirates but is scared because the employment agency with which she signed her contract is looking for her and has demanded her family pay them USD 500 as compensation for not completing her contract.
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